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Originally Posted by FLF82  |
FLF82:
I've taken the liberty to rewrite your introductory paragraph. Your original:
"Whether new or old, natural stone requires regular upkeep to ensure it looks its best and remains that way for years to come.
Tri-State Stone is a company specializing in the refinishing, repairing and maintaining of natural stone in both commercial and residential settings.
To ensure good communication and complete customer satisfaction, our specialists meet directly with each customer to assess their needs, provide an itemized estimate and then return to complete the work.
Rather than following the latest trends, we achieve superior results using time-tested procedures, equipment and products. As skilled tradesmen, we take extraordinary pride in our work, settling for nothing less than complete customer satisfaction."
You've got just over a hundred words there, I say virtually the same thing below in just over fifty:
"Tri-State Stone specializes in refinishing, repairing and maintaining natural stone in commercial and residential settings.
Your complete customer satisfaction is always guaranteed. Our specialists assess your needs, make recommendations and provide an itemized estimate before beginning work.
Let our skilled tradesmen give your natural stone the care it needs to keep performing and looking great for years to come."
Furthermore, my last paragraph urges the customer to take action.
I hope I don't seem to forward, but you asked.
Joe
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